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Author: rob <rob@tarina.org>
Date: Sun, 27 Nov 2022 22:56:23 +0200
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@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ Tv swithes channel to the 9pm news. 9pm Tv News anchor turns around in the dark.
9PM TV NEWS ANCHOR
Welcome to 9pm News. There's been another murder near the small town of Purple Lilly. It's confirmed that the tragedy took place last night at around 10-11pm, another family gone in these brutal series of murders.
-We see house of Mr. Monopolo man. Police and Ambulance lights. Bodies are carried out on stretchers with white blankets on them by firemen. They lay the bodies on stretchers outside the house and go in to get more bodies.
+We see house. Police and Ambulance lights. Bodies are carried out on stretchers with white blankets on them by firemen. They lay the bodies on stretchers outside the house and go in to get more bodies.
REPORTER
The murder took place here at their home in their home village close by the town of Purple Lilly. We asked a neighbour if they heard anythin unusual around 3am when the murder took place.
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ MOTHER
You heard your father, now you to go wash your teeth, I come tok you in and read you a good night story.
BOY
-Yeeee. I want you to read the story with the wizzard.
+Yeeee. I want you to read the story with the lizzard mAAN.
MOTHER
Now, go brush your teeth.
@@ -250,12 +250,12 @@ INT. TV ROOM
The Father notices something is up. He got a HUnch. He looks to the window.
-Father goes to the kid room.
+Father goes to the kidis room.
INT. KIDS ROOM
FATHER
-Hey, why dont we all sleep upstair tonight. It's warmer there. Feels a little cold in this room.
+Hey, why dont we all sleep upstair tonight. It's warmer there. Feels a little cold here.
BOY
WYeee!!
@@ -264,7 +264,7 @@ The boy run out of room and upstair with pillow and a blanket. Mother sitting in
INT. STAIRS
-Girl go up the stairs with pillow and blanket. CLOSE UP her feet. Walking up stairs. Slo-mo.
+Girl go up the stairs with pillow and blanket. CLOSE UP her feet. Running up stairs. Slo-mo.
EXT. HOUSE
@@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ The girl take a knife from secret drawer. The boy is upstair looking at sister g
CLOSE UP dad down stair, still taking cover from the wall looking at broken window. Looking at the sledghammer. WTF?! SHit fuck where are they. Ok. Take it easy. I got my shotgun. He look at his woman and girl coming down in the stairs with a knife.
FATHER
-just stay there ok.
+just stay here ok.
Father show them to get down.
@@ -325,14 +325,22 @@ A guy from behind Father hit him with a shovel in his head. He shoot this guys s
The father crawl up. He look at girl. He nod. The girl does a Kung Foo move. She start running with the knife.
-Father grab bad guy arm. He swing him around, he down on floor, SMACK! GIRL stab him in heart. He go out. Girl go hide behind dad. Ok, there's at least two more. God job sweatheart. Dad give girl a kiss on the forehead.
+Father grab bad guy arm. He swing him around, he down on floor, SMACK! GIRL stab him in heart. He go out. Girl go hide behind dad.
+
+GIRL
+One down, there's at least two more.
+
+FATHER
+God job sweatheart.
+
+Dad give girl a kiss on the forehead.
GIRL
Anytime dad, anytime.
FATHER
(whisper)
-ok, go out through back window go check their back. See if you see something. Stay in the shadows, as you been thought. Come back report to me ok. only if it seem safe other you run away ok.
+ok, go out through back window go check their back. See if you see something. Stay in the shadows, as you been thought. Come back. only if it safe ok.
They can hear that the bad guys has their mother and boy upstair. Father give hand sign to girl go.
@@ -341,7 +349,7 @@ be the shadow.
Predator music. Girl goes in the back of the downstair, there's a small window. She climb up to that window. Open and go out into the darkness.
-Father clear down stair TV room. And kid room. He open the Pannuhuone room. There's bad guy comming straight at him with an axe. He shot him down. He blast into two pieces. We dont see it but that what it sounded like.
+Father clear down stair TV room. And kid room. He open the Pannuhuone room. There's bad guy comming straight at him with an axe. He shot him down. He blast into two pieces.
EXT. OUTSIDE
@@ -386,9 +394,7 @@ INT. UPSTAIR
Dad nods to her through the broken window.
-We hear somekinda device start to beep. One of bad guy have somkind explosion on him.
-
-Dad picks the bad guy up.
+We hear somekinda device start to beep. It's a rocket launcher the UGLY BAD GUY has.
FATHER
(looking at girl outside)
@@ -398,25 +404,15 @@ EXT. OUTSIDE
BIG BADA boom. House blow up.
-EXT. INSIDE
-
-There's near to near combat. WE hear mother and boy scream. THey hit boy with something. Sounded like an axe, I'm sorry, but that was how it sounded like. No sound anymore.
-
-The girl is terrified. sHe hear somebody comming. A man come up to her. We dont see his face.
-
-The man fires the gun but. Click! it dont fire. The kid get away. The kid get away.
-
-MAN
-Good damit!
+Bad guy start the van on the neighbours yard start. We see girl. Looking like WTF OMFG all my family just blew up. We see, that she sees the Bad GUy driving away.
-He donks the firearm in the door carm, it fires. BANG!
+it's the UGLY JAMES BOND VILLAIN.
-MAN
-GOd damnit!
+The girl trie to fire as he drive passed her. but. Click! it dont fire. The Villain get away. The Villain get away.
EXT. SHED AND HOUSE
-Kid runnin away from her home. Other side of road there is a cementary. She run trough cementary.
+Kid runnin away from her burnin blown up family and home. Other side of road there is a cementary. She run to it cementary. There's light on in the chappel. Shee go get help.
CUT TO:
@@ -429,7 +425,7 @@ The Best Way To Stop it is To Do Better Brainwashing
EXT. SPACE MOSTLY NIGHT
-Earth from space. Some part still eveneing most part dark. Some part dark and cloudy and with thunder storm. Other part are clear sky you see the city lights. We fly up. There's snow. Northern from Africa, we ZOOM in to about 2000 rock throws away east of Helsinki. ZOOM in to the thickest of bushes in the woods.
+Earth from space. Some part still eveneing most part dark. Some part dark and cloudy and with thunder storm. Other part are clear sky you see the city lights. We fly up. There's snow. We go north from Africa, we ZOOM in to about 2000 rock throws away east of Helsinki. ZOOM in to the thickest of bushes in the woods.
Snow, cold, white, pure, christal but blue tinting, PAN UP to blue dark woods, lot's of snow. Wind synth sounds. We go deeper into the dark blue woods. They humming mixes with drumming. Indian drum. I mean Native American Drum. Or African or Native lookin anyways.
@@ -746,11 +742,11 @@ Picture of someone growing mycelium. Picture of inoculating mushrooms in a tree
CODER
Even more than before. Never before had there been a Permanent Culture movement taking over at this rate. We started taking responsibility, our lands florished. We saw possibilites to create food and forrests and foodforrests and cattle, animals all around. It was nice. No one could ever have imagined, we got busy living, IRRLING, as we say it.
-EXT. CODER YARD
+EXT. CODER YARD - WINTER DAY
Coder comming back from the woods to his yard, he got a two full plastic bags with him, on one there's a text "GNIIDEL". Like lidl. But Gnidel brand. Coder stand there thinking.
-EXT. CODER TARD SUMMER DAY
+EXT. CODER YARD - SUMMER DAY
Sunny golden blue sky and that blue greenish thing that the plants get in the shadows which you can see those beautiful sunny days. He is doing his Permanent Living and Culture thing in the green blueish green plants. Then he building a bee hive. Bee sound.
@@ -816,7 +812,7 @@ They want everything from you. All your freedom.
Black cab drive on hiway. TILT TO hiway leadin to city.
CODER
-And then this fucking SCANVENGERS thing, the bug. People getting raped and murder and raped for nothing. I don't know much about it. No one knows what the Fuck is Going on in that mad world. But people have gotten fucking crazy over something for sure. I dont even wanna talk about it.
+And then this fucking hack, the bug. And then people start getting murder and raped for nothing. I don't know much about it. No one knows what the Fuck is Going on. People sure gotten fucking crazy over something.
A van RUSTY VAN comin from city. TILT DOWN.
@@ -835,7 +831,13 @@ Cobhouse, Rocket Stove. Nice and cozy. Coder sitting writing. heating hiis bare
Coder is writing something on his rasta computer.
CODER
-We got good at burning wood. Not wasting any of those gases, and we had the solution right in front of use all the time. The preppers knew. The cobhouse builders knew it and oOh boj have we been building like never before. Lot of people. I mean I think we'd be a third by know of eveybadi around and things are actually much better now than back when we grew food that we couldnt afford and it was killing us. We can stop the war now man. Or later, I prefer now. There's no better surplus if we talking about not using gas or coal or oil. Wood is when you think the best way to start responsible living right here right now buddy! grow some trees and see them grow, nurture them! climb them. Plant them on the best spots, where they got best water or you can experiment and groe some in dry places with almost no water, u be surpised of what come outta it for sure.
+We got good at burning wood. Not wasting any of those gases, and we had the solution right in front of use all the time. The preppers knew. The cobhouse builders knew it and oOh boj have we been building like never before. Lot of people. I mean I think we'd be a third by now of all around doing it this way. Things are actually getting much better now than back when we grew food that we couldnt afford.
+
+CODER
+It was killing us. Still is. They still fighting it. Over the last black drops. We could stop the war now. Or later, I prefer now. There's no better surplus if we talking about not using gas or coal or oil.
+
+CODER
+Wood is when you think the best way to start responsible living right here right now buddy! grow some trees and see them grow, nurture them! climb them. Plant them on the best spots, where they got best water or you can experiment and groe some in dry places with almost no water, u be surpised of what come outta it for sure.
Coder scrolling some kinda music shop online. radiorymd.com. He upload new sound to the site. Name of the sound. Groundingsound. HE check a box include date in filename. File is uploading. Coder goes to a site looks like twitter or youtube. Presses something.
@@ -1071,11 +1073,11 @@ Hoodie hear a sound from behind, he turns to see. Scanvenger Two approaches from
HOODIE
Sighs.(again, like Big)
+Hoodie looks at SCANVENGER 1. SCANVENGER 1 looks at Hoodie.
+
SCANVENGER 1
You get three seconds to get down buddy, one, two, three. Now you die.
-Hoodie looks at SCANVENGER 1. SCANVENGER 1 looks at Hoodie.
-
Scanvenger One shoots. Hoodie takes out his samurai sword from his back and hits the bullet. A sharp kling sound and a very loud ricochete swirling sound. The bullet hits a huge metallic thing at the factory wall roof corner. It looks like it got many pipes pointing vertically, there is a sign "AUTOMATIC INTRUDER DEFENDER" on the wall near the thing. The bullet makes a ricochet sound.
SCANVENGER ONE
@@ -1154,7 +1156,7 @@ Kid2 gathers himself and takes three steps to get momentum and is going for it.
PAN TO:
-Madbakers van approching where Kid2 is going to cross the road. Close up Kid2 determined to cross the road. Just looking straight at the ramp. Ville notices Madbakers van.
+Madbakers van approching where Kid2 is going to cross the road. Close up Kid2 determined to cross the road. Just looking straight at the ramp. KID1 notices Madbakers van.
KID1
Holy shit!!
@@ -1164,7 +1166,7 @@ Kid2 still determined to just do it.
KID1
stop!! stop! oh my pussy tit ass licking cock sucker it is Maaad Baker! (O.S.)
-Madbaker still looking terrified about the burning speakers back in the van.He don't look at where he is driving. He just worry about his speakers.
+Madbaker still looking terrified about the burning speakers back in the van. He don't look at where he is driving. He just worry about his speakers.
Madbakers van approching the spot where Kid2 is going to cross over for the jump. Kid2 just thinks about what kind of a trick he'll make in the air. Everything is in slow-motion now. We follow Kid2 and what he is thinking.
@@ -1257,7 +1259,7 @@ Goddamit.
A song start playing LOUDLY from the middle of the song. The speakers are wildly fucking vibrating. CLOSE UP electic popping and buzzing. BLAM! and there's a little fire on the soundsystem on top of a owen is it? Anyways some big metallic owen cabin thing in the bakery where he got that soundsystem installed.
-Madbaker pushes the little loader with bags of rye to the dough maker. He looks at his almost ready made dough and starts adding rye flour from the bags. Behind him in the window we see the minigun that is still shooting at a little piece of minced meat that rasta is hodling on to while dancing.
+Madbaker pushes the little loader with bags of rye to the dough maker. He looks at his almost ready made dough and starts adding rye flour from the bags. Behind him in the window we see the minigun that is still shooting at a little piece of minced meat that Hoodie is hodling on to while dancing.
EXT. BAKERY
@@ -1303,7 +1305,7 @@ Madbaker is now putting dough on owen plates and presses them with a tool slicin
INT. MINIGUN SYSTEM
-We see how the Minigun Automatic Intruder Defender sees the world. It is pixlated and objects have guesses around them of what computer has guessed it is. Some things are just plain wrong. It is trying to identifie Hoodie. There's a box around him. And a text "identifing unidentified_420.obj..." Bliping sounds.
+We see how the Minigun Automatic Intruder Defender sees the world. It is pixlated and objects have guesses around them of what computer has guessed it is. Some things are just plain wrong. It is trying to identifie Hoodie. There's a box around him. And a text "identifing unidentified.obj..." Bliping sounds.
CUT TO:
EXT. OUTSIDE
@@ -1323,7 +1325,7 @@ Hoodie takes another piece of dry bread from his pocket. Hears Madbakers music s
INT. BAKERY
-Madbaker putting bread in the owen. He sees that there's a small hole in one of the bakery windows. He gets teriffied like when his speaker got on fire. He stops the music and walks to the window. What the hell is going on? already two times something like this today. Close up on burning speakers up on this owen thing. Madbaker looks through in the small hole in the window and sees Hoodie standing there outside. Hoodie looks small as the hole, he is chewing on a piece of bread.
+Madbaker putting bread in the owen. He sees that there's a small hole in one of the bakery windows. He gets teriffied. He stops the music and walks to the window. What the hell is going on? already two times something like this today. Close up on burning speakers up on this owen thing. Madbaker looks through in the small hole in the window and sees Hoodie standing there outside. Hoodie looks small as the hole, he is chewing on a piece of bread.
HOODIE
Whats up man?
@@ -1391,7 +1393,7 @@ I was home wiht my family and somebody came in. I fought, I fought and I fought.
Scanvenger one dies. Hoodie takes his hand out of this mans body. Look like hoodie held on to him hearth. Now he slept away in peace.
SCANVENGER ONE
-I was in the military. I fought good. You know, I failed in the end. I got killed, and my family and friends got killed all becuse of my kindness. I showed them only love and offered a place if they didnt have. We communicated. Shared ideas, herbs. kindness, forgivness, understanding. I zoned out. I dont know what happen.??
+I was in the military. I fought good. You know, I failed in the end. I got killed, and my family and friends got killed all becuse of my kindness. I showed them only love and offered a place if they didnt have. We communicated. Shared ideas, kindness, forgivness, understanding.
HOODIE
Ok buddy take it easy think about something nice. I think you gonna go soon buddy. Think about something nice.
@@ -1497,7 +1499,7 @@ Hoodie jumps outta the van. Goes into the bush.
EXT. HOODIES BATCAVE
-Hoodie climbs a humongus rock with 5 steps. He whisles. A bird flies away makin a stick which holds Hoodies bike from moving make it move forward between the rocks.
+Hoodie climbs a humongus rock with 5 steps. He whisles. A bird flies away makin a stick which holds Hoodies bike from moving make it move forward between the rocks becus gravity.
The bicycle has moved to the other side of the rock and keep moving moving as Hoodie jumps off the rock on the bicycle and bicycles away. He comes back to the road.
@@ -1516,7 +1518,7 @@ Couple of more nice flat country side shots in Hommansby. Hoodie riding Madbaker
EXT. CODER GARDEN
-Hoodie riding the bike in on Coders yard. We see the red shed. And Coders house. Then we see Madbakervan coming in on Corders yard from right to left. There's a sign "PERMANENT CULTURE INTERNATIONAL, SKINNARBY FIN" in the green garden and that buzzing sound. Like it be around Coder. Always that buzzin.
+Hoodie riding the bike in on Coders yard. We see the red shed. And Coders house. Then we see Madbakervan coming in on Coders yard from right to left. There's a sign "PERMANENT CULTURE INTERNATIONAL, SKINNARBY FIN" in the green garden and that buzzing sound. Like it be around Coder. Always that buzzin.
INT. CODER HOUSE.
@@ -1567,7 +1569,7 @@ MADBAKER
Really?
HOODIE
-oh this man stereo broken
+oh this man stereo broken man
CODER
Theres ongoin disturbance yes. No need to fix nothing now. We got to make sure from where these disturbance things comes from.
@@ -1687,7 +1689,7 @@ I got this. I got this.
HOODIE
(to Madbaker)
-I always knew Coder got it. I meen Coder got it, he gets it. Ya.
+I always knew u got it. I meen get it. Ya.
HOODIE
(to Madbaker)
@@ -1777,7 +1779,7 @@ AGENT
One, one.
GENERAL
-Is it Seventhy or one or Seventhy one Special agent, I'm sorry I didn't catch your name.
+Is it Seventhy or one or Seventhy one Special agent,
AGENT
It's Seventhy One Agent Seventhyone sir. one, one one ..
@@ -1842,7 +1844,7 @@ Yes kernal.
KERNAL
I got the keys, and the keys are mine, and no never, shall one ever, take away my keys,
-KERNAL can see that Agent start to laugh. He is cold but he start laughing at Keranl password.
+KERNAL can see that Agent start to laugh. He and edison are laughing at Keranl password.
KERNAL
Special Agent? What are you laughing about? Can you still hear me? Edison? Didnt you mute me? EDISON?
@@ -1850,7 +1852,7 @@ Special Agent? What are you laughing about? Can you still hear me? Edison? Didnt
WE in other room we can hear Edison and Agent laughing at Kernal. Back in Kernal room he cant hear them laughing.
KERNAL
-Goddamit ok! I dont care you cant do anythin about it. I am logging in. I got the keys, and the keys are mine, and no never, shall one ever, take away my keys, they belong to me.
+Goddamit ok! I dont care you cant do anythin about it anyways. I am logging in. I got the keys, and the keys are mine, and no never, shall one ever, take away my keys, they belong to me.
Edison and Agent just laughing ridiculasly at Kernal.
@@ -1866,7 +1868,7 @@ Okey Edison, this is you goddam last warning.
Edison and Agent still laughing. Edison not so much now.
KERNAL
-That's right Edison. I can screw you loose. I got the keys anyway without you. I just use my Ivanowitch friend a brother with a long penis too.
+That's right Edison. I can screw you loose. I got the keys anyways. I just use my Ivanowitch friend a brother with a long penis too.
KErnal takes his AK-47 from his top drawer.
