commit 50bd809bdf34c43565b211d73f7454f2ee908701
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Author: rob <rob@tarina.org>
Date: Tue, 29 Nov 2022 01:31:53 +0200
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-A sound described as millions of computers talking. Changing frequencies. Low humming. Space crafty. Rotating Earthy. That's right, rotating earthy.
+A sound described as millions of computers talking. Changing frequencies. Low humming. Space crafty. Rotating Earthy. That's right, rotating earthy.
>**CODER**<
@@ -40,27 +40,29 @@ A sound described as millions of computers talking. Changing frequencies. Low h
EXT. WOODS NIGHT
-Woods in the winter. Snow you can walk on. When it been a couple days above zero celcius ofcurse. Then it get freakin cold so the snow melt and then freeze to snow ice. Now you can walk on the snow/ice everywhere. It hold, sometimes even a freakin car.
+Woods in the winter. Snow you can walk on. When it been a couple days above zero celcius and then get cold so the snow melt and then freeze to snow ice. You can walk on the snow/ice everywhere. It hold, sometime even hold a freakin car.
-A Deer chillin in the dark blue woods walking on the snow. Finding things to eat on the ground.
+A Deer chillin in the dark blue woods walking on snow. Finding things to eat.
-Deer run away cuz there's a road nearby. A rusty old van drives past us.
+Deer run away cuz there's a road nearby and a rusty old van.
The van drives right at us and park in front of us.
-The van steaming. Left van door opens. CLOSE UP. Tobacco butts fall out with some used needles. A BIG GUY climbs out of the left front seat. Walks to the Van sidedoor and open it.
+The van steaming. Left van door opens. CLOSE UP. Tobacco butts, used needles and other shit fall out of the van. CLOSE UP boots. A BIG GUY climbs out of the left front seat. Walks to the Van sidedoor and open it.
-Right front van door open. UGLY JAMES BOND VILLAIN get out. HE go straight to the back of the van. He open back door and two more guys jump out. BADGUY1 and BADGUY2, lookin like they gonna go on a mission.
+Right front van door open. UGLY JAMES BOND VILLAIN get out. HE go straight to the back of the van. He open back door and two more guys jump out. BADGUY1 and BADGUY2, lookin like they gonna go on a mission. They lit their cigarettes.
CLOSE UP lot of different guns in the van.
-Some start loading em guns.
+BIG GUY start checking em guns.
-Ugly James Bond Villain looks past the camera.
+Ugly James Bond Villain looks past the camera smokin.
UGGLY JAMES BOND VILLAIN
It is going to be an easy one. Both houses in and out.
+Throw cigarette butt on grund.
+
EXT. TWO HOUSES
We see two houses near each other. On a hill. A road connecting the houses upon the hill. A cementary on the other side of the road. We look where road goes. Theres that same van comming. The rusty old van.
