commit e051f601d0c25e56f3020c6e22a75c78c96a6e2f
parent b3e82b9f1e4cfde5c627312a2fd1be15da6d9704
Author: rob <rob@tarina.org>
Date: Mon, 28 Nov 2022 22:02:40 +0200
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diff --git a/coder.fountain b/coder.fountain
@@ -40,17 +40,17 @@ A sound described as millions of computers talking. Changing frequencies. Low h
EXT. WOODS NIGHT
-Woods in the winter. Snow you can walk on. When its been a couple days above zero. Then it gets cold. The snow melts and then freeze to snow ice. You then walk on the snow everywhere.
+Woods in the winter. Snow you can walk on. When it been a couple days above zero celcius ofcurse. Then it get freakin cold so the snow melt and then freeze to snow ice. Now you can walk on the snow/ice everywhere. It hold, sometimes even a freakin car.
A Deer chillin in the dark blue woods walking on the snow. Finding things to eat on the ground.
-Deer run away cuz someone comming. There's a road nearby. A rusty old van drives past us on the road.
+Deer run away cuz there's a road nearby. A rusty old van drives past us.
-The van it drives right at us and park right in front of us.
+The van drives right at us and park in front of us.
-It's cold outside. The van is steaming. Left van door opens. CLOSE UP. tobacco butts fall out with some used needles. A BIG GUY climbs out of the left front seat. Walks to the Van sidedoor and open it.
+The van steaming. Left van door opens. CLOSE UP. Tobacco butts fall out with some used needles. A BIG GUY climbs out of the left front seat. Walks to the Van sidedoor and open it.
-Right door opens. UGLY JAMES BOND VILLAIN jump out. HE go straight to the back of the van. He open back door of van, Two more guys jump out. BADGUY1 and BADGUY2, lookin like the go on a mission.
+Right front van door open. UGLY JAMES BOND VILLAIN get out. HE go straight to the back of the van. He open back door and two more guys jump out. BADGUY1 and BADGUY2, lookin like they gonna go on a mission.
CLOSE UP lot of different guns in the van.
@@ -61,11 +61,13 @@ Ugly James Bond Villain looks past the camera.
UGGLY JAMES BOND VILLAIN
It is going to be an easy one. Both houses in and out.
-We see a picture of two houses near each other. On a hill. A road connecting the houses upon the hill. THere's a cementary on the other side of the road. We look where road goes. There's a van comming. The rusty old van.
+EXT. TWO HOUSES
+
+We see two houses near each other. On a hill. A road connecting the houses upon the hill. A cementary on the other side of the road. We look where road goes. Theres that same van comming. The rusty old van.
INT. FAMILY TV ROOM
-FATHER, MOTHER, SON, DOTTER watchin TV. They sitting in a sofa watching this small tv screen. They watch Mononoke. The scene making our hero ready to go out watchin the world with unclouded eyes. They have a fireplace and there's a fire goin.
+FATHER, MOTHER, SON, DOTTER watchin TV. They sit in sofa and arm chair watching this small TV. They watch Mononoke. The scene where our hero is ready to go out watchin the world with unclouded eyes. They have a fireplace and a fire goin.
FATHER
(Obama voice)
@@ -832,13 +834,13 @@ INT. COBBHOUSE WOOD WINTER
Cobhouse, Rocket Stove. Nice and cozy. Coder sitting writing on he computer. heating hiis bare foot on the Stove while having some rastabrew and rastastew.
CODER
-We got good at burning wood. Not wasting any of those gases, and we had the solution right in front of use all the time. The preppers knew. The cobhouse builders knew it and oOh boj have we been building like never before. Lots of people. I mean I think we'd be a third by now of all around doing it. Things are actually much better now than back when we grew food that we couldnt afford.
+We got good at burning wood. Not wasting any of those gases, and we had the solution right in front of use all the time. The preppers knew. The cobhouse builders knew it and oOh boj have we been building like never before. Lots of people. I mean I think we'd be half by now of all around. Things are actually a helluva lot better now than back when we grew food that we couldnt afford by puttin more energy on makin food than we got back. Fossil energy made us lazy ass bitches. Imagine how fucking retarded we where back then. We believed that shippin all things around the world all the time was a good solution.
CODER
-It was killing us. Still is. They still fighting it. Over thouse last thick black drops. We could stop the war now. Or later, I prefer now. There's no better surplus if we talking about not using gas or coal or oil.
+It was killing us and still is, fuck, those motherfuckers still fighting for the last thick black drops they pump. We could've just stop the stupid war, but people believed in these assholes, still do.
CODER
-Wood is when you think abuot it, it's the best way to start responsible living right here right now. Grow trees, nurture them, climb them, use them. Plant them on the best spots, where they got best water or you can experiment and grow some in dry places with no water, u be surpised of what come outta it for sure.
+Wood is when you think abuot it best way to start responsible living right here right now. Grow trees, nurture them, climb them, use them. Plant them on the best spots, where they got best water or you can experiment and grow some in dry places with no water, u be surpised of what come outta it for sure.
Coder scrolling some kinda music shop online. radiorymd.com. He upload new sound to the site. Name of the sound. Groundingsound. HE check a box include date in filename. File is uploading. Coder goes to a site looks like twitter or youtube. Presses something.
@@ -1403,11 +1405,13 @@ I was home wiht my family and somebody came in. I fought, I fought and I fought.
Scanvenger one dies. Hoodie takes his hand out of this mans body. Look like hoodie held on to him hearth. Now he slept away in peace.
SCANVENGER ONE
-I was in the military. I fought good. You know, I failed in the end. I got killed, and my family and friends got killed all becuse of my kindness. I showed them only love and offered a place if they didnt have. We communicated. Shared ideas, kindness, forgivness, understanding.
+I was in the military. I fought good. You know, I failed in the end. I got killed, and my family and friends got killed all becuse of me. It all my fault. I showed them love and offered a place to stay. We communicated. Shared ideas, kindness, forgivness, understanding.
HOODIE
Ok buddy take it easy think about something nice. I think you gonna go soon buddy. Think about something nice.
+Hoodie holds on to Scanvengers hand.
+
SCANVENGER ONE
yeah, aaah, mmmm, I guess the days I still was young and listenin to the stooges.
@@ -1935,7 +1939,7 @@ Kernel step inside an old elevator laughing.
KERNEL
So long suckers.
-Elevator door closes. To secret under ground bunker, that's bunkers right.
+Elevator door closes. To secret under ground bunker, that's bonkers.
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