commit 26a213442addd1ffcc524c66ff3d625b4649a19c
parent 18abc41ef50b3d252118506dcc6d7502f2c6b48c
Author: rob <rob@tarina.org>
Date: Fri, 25 Nov 2022 02:29:33 +0200
seconddraft3
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@@ -37,13 +37,75 @@ A sound described as millions of computers talking. Changing frequencies. Low h
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+CODER
+You don't own land anymore you secure it. You build a community and make sure no one mess with you.
+
+Coder walking a village road.
+
+still walking,
+
+CODER
+Fuck Human Rights maan! should be All Living Rights maan! All the time, all the time.
+
+still walking.
+
+CODER
+All Living!
+All loving!
+All livin
+and lovin
+Rights.
+yeaaah broo!
+
+Coder turn around looking where he came from, still walking. No body there.
+
+Still walking
+
+CODER
+Oh yeah, oh yeah baby oh, yeah, yeah, ya wanna get real real serious with me, okidoki lady, first of all, honey, you better get in the garden with me and ill show you my cock and my chicken maybe we can hang out in the garden house? try out one of those low dangling red tomatos. thy redy lookin real red and tasty. we make salsa? chili. is that ok to you my special? oh yeah my babyyy. oh good! Only for you! My special darling. My dear. Beloved. Everything. Heart And Soul.
+
+Coder still walking.
+
+CODER
+When are we ever luckiest as human beings? Are we ever gonna be fully happie?? fully satisfied??
+
+CODER
+Ladies and gentlemen let me present you the power of the mind. connect. Set mindset too lucky! it is in everything. and In and around you. Lucky, lucky, lucky, lucky
+
+CODER
+I grew up and thought I had some purpuse in this. thanks. What the hell whas it all about. Goin to mars?
+
+Sound. Low sound.
+
+CODER
+We had to go searchin and searchin when it was all there right under our feet, under our nose, our tose, right there in front of us all that time.
+
+Grounding feet. Someone in the garden. Smelling. Smilling
+
EXT. WOODS NIGHT
-Woods in the winter. Snow you can walk on. When it has been wet couple days, even rain a bit. Then it gets cold again. The snow freeze to ice, you can then walk on the snow everywhere in the woods.
+Woods in the winter. Snow you can walk on. When its been a couple days above zero. Then it gets cold. The snow melts and then freeze to snow ice. You then walk on the snow everywhere.
+
+A Deer chillin in the dark blue woods walking on the snow. Finding things to eat on the ground.
+
+Deer run away cuz someone comming. There's a road nearby. A rusty old van drives past us on the road.
+
+INT. FAMILY HOME
+
+, it drives right at us and park right in front of us.
+
+It's cold outside. The van is steaming. Left van dor opens. CLOSE UP. tobacco butts fall out. A BIG GUY climbs out of the seat. Walks to the Van sidedoor and open it. CLOSE UP lot of different guns in the van.
+
+Right door opens. UGLY JAMES BOND VILLAIN jump out. HE go straight to the back of the van. He open back door of van, Two more guys jump out. BADGUY1 and BADGUY2, lookin like the go on a mission.
+
+UGGLY JAMES BOND VILLAIN
+Now this is an easy one. Lock and load.
+
+Badguy1 is standing and lookin at the a thi
+
+BADGUY1
-A huge animal chillin in the dark woods walking on the snow. Finding things to eat on the ground.
-Animal run away cuz someone comming.
INT. FAMILY TV ROOM
@@ -56,7 +118,7 @@ Ok, now we need to check the news. It on now. We can then continue with the movi
He stop movie. Boy and Girl and mother sighs.
FATHER
-you gotta know what is going on in the world around you. Well informed of what is going on.
+you gotta know what is going on in the world around you.
Tv swithes channel to the 9pm news. 9pm Tv News anchor turns around in the dark. Light come on.
@@ -96,7 +158,7 @@ MOTHER
Should we call someone?
FATHER
-You know what? What if you kids played some video game. Dad need to do some phone calls.
+You know what. Let's shut the TV for tonite.
The boy is playin with somethin. He too young to understand.
