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Date: Wed, 23 Nov 2022 18:10:14 +0200
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Title:
__**CODER**__
Credit: Written by
-Author: Robin J. Bäckman
+Author: Robin Johannes
Source: Story by Beckmen Brothers
Draft date 4/20/2022 Second draft
Contact:
@@ -13,11 +13,13 @@ Contact:
===
+A sound described as millions of computers talking. Changing frequencies. Low humming. Space crafty. Rotating Earthy. That's right, rotating earthy.
+
>**CODER**<
>**a Rockman Brothers movie**<
->**written by Robin J Bäckman**<
+>**written by Robin Johannes**<
>**story by Beckmen Brothers**<
@@ -35,6 +37,136 @@ Contact:
===
+EXT. WOODS NIGHT
+
+Woods in the winter. Snow you can walk on. When it has been wet couple days, even rain a bit. Then it gets cold again. The snow freeze to ice, you can then walk on the snow everywhere in the woods.
+
+A huge animal chillin in the dark woods walking on the snow. Finding things to eat on the ground.
+
+Animal run away cuz someone comming.
+
+INT. FAMILY TV ROOM
+
+FATHER, MOTHER, SON, DOTTER watchin TV. They watch a movie.
+
+FATHER
+(Obama voice)
+Ok, now we need to check the news. It on now. We can then continue with the movie.
+
+He stop movie. Boy and Girl and mother sighs.
+
+FATHER
+you gotta know what is going on in the world around you. Well informed of what is going on.
+
+Tv swithes channel to the 9pm news. 9pm Tv News anchor turns around in the dark. Light come on.
+
+9PM TV NEWS ANCHOR
+Welcome to 9pm News. There's been another murder. It's confirmed that Mr. Monopolo family is dead.
+
+We see house of Mr. Monopolo man. Police and Ambulance lights. Bodies are carried out on stretchers with white blankets on them by firemen. They lay the bodies on stretchers outside the house and go in to get more bodies.
+
+REPORTER
+The murder took place here at their home in their home village. We asked a neighbour if they heard anythin unusual around 3am when the murder took place.
+
+Neighbour chewing gum.
+
+NEIGHBOUR
+wow, am I like on the tv news now. wow. naa I aint heard shiit but grounge whole night me an my homies we playin Louuuud I aint hearin but constant ringing. Like this.
+
+DOes this white noise thing sound.
+
+NEIGHBOUR
+wooow! (get sentimental) you real fine looking lady, you are a beautiful woman you know that. Speak to me. I love to hear you speak to me
+
+Neighbour turns to the camera.
+
+NEIGHBOUR
+Yeeee, yeee, yee!! ssup everyboody!
+
+Neigbour turns back to Reporter.
+
+NEIGHBOUR
+Naa, na, I meen, I understand these killers go after the ones owning somthin, right? He, rest in peace my neighbour and his whole family, he was a like a brother to me, he really was a good guy you know, helped everybodi in this community, help gro good food. I gonna miss him a lot. He had a lot of laand you know. That's why they came after him. It aint right, iit aint right. This shit is noot right.
+
+Father shut of the TV.
+
+Mother and dotter looking terrified of what they just saw in the news.
+
+MOTHER
+Should we call someone?
+
+FATHER
+You know what? What if you kids played some video game. Dad need to do some phone calls.
+
+The boy is playin with somethin. He too young to understand.
+
+EXT. SHED AND HOUSE
+
+SCANVENGERs pick up an axe, shovel, and other tools from the shed. They walk to the big lit window of the house. We see the family trough the window.
+
+INT. HOUSE
+
+The Father notices something is up. He got a HUnch. He looks to the window. We hear the Window crash. SMACK. Bad guys come in from window.
+
+FATHER
+(shouting)
+Go! RUN!
+
+The girl run to another room upstairs and knows where his fathers shotgun is at. She opens a secret drawer. The girl throw shotgun to father in the middle down the stairs. She throw a belt with shells. Father pumping shotgun standing down the stairs half way down. He put belt with shells on over his shoulder. We see him looking at the two walls leading to the TV room the mother and boy is still at. Father goes to see what up with his shotgun up. FATHER POV. FATHER CLOSE UP. Goin down the stairs. Slowly.
+
+The girl take a knife from secret drawer. She also start go down the stair. CLOSE UP. feet. CLOSE UP girl with knife. BAD ASS MOTHERFUCKING MUSIC. The Thing and Rammstein mashup.
+
+CLOSE UP dad down stair, still taking cover from the wall looking at broken window. SHit fuck where are they. Fuck what if they got mi lady and son? I fucked up. Ok. Take it easy. I got my shotgun. He look at his girl coming down in the stairs with a knife.
+
+FATHER
+just stay there ok.
+
+Dad is going into the TV Room. There's a bad guy. Dad shoots, misses. Somebody shoot at him. A shot cuts open his cheek and makes a huge hole into the wall where the girl is standing, she is down from the stairs.
+
+The girl look like OMFG WTF.
+
+Father take cover from a brown leather tv chair and put more ammo in shotgun. He shoot. He miss. He shoot again just to scare them off. They shoot at him. The leg of the tv chair goes into pieces from the shot. And the chair is now on three legs.
+
+A guy from behind hit him with a shovel in his head. He shoot this guys shovel when he is trying to do it again. The shovel bounces in bad guy head. Nice DONG! sound.
+
+The father crawls up. He look at girl. He show to girl go away.
+
+FATHER
+(whisper)
+run, run!
+
+They can hear that the bad guys has their mother and boy in another room. Father again. Hand sign to girl go away.
+
+FATHER
+Run!
+
+Father goes full Rambo Commando mode in the room where boy and mother is. Flying and shooting with his shotgun in slo-mo. BLAM! pump, BLAM! pump, BLAM! pump. Still in the air.
+
+FATHER
+AAaaargh!
+
+We hear shoting sound from pistol coming from the room father just jumped in. The girl still standin same location. We hear a body fall. There's near to near combat. WE hear mother and boy scream. THey hit boy with something. Sounded like an axe, I'm sorry, but that was how it sounded like. No sound anymore.
+
+The girl is terrified. sHe hear somebody comming. A man come up to her. We dont see his face.
+
+The man fires the gun but. Click! it dont fire. The kid get away. The kid get away.
+
+MAN
+Good damit!
+
+He donks the firearm in the door carm, it fires. BANG!
+
+MAN
+GOd damnit!
+
+EXT. SHED AND HOUSE
+
+Kid runnin away from her home. Other side of road there is a cementary. She run trough cementary.
+
+CUT TO:
+
+Black.
+
CODER
(O.S.)
(like a Bruce Willis one liner)
@@ -44,7 +176,7 @@ EXT. SPACE MOSTLY NIGHT
Earth from space. Some part still eveneing most part dark. Some part dark and cloudy and with thunder storm. Other part are clear sky you see the city lights. We fly up. There's snow. Northern from Africa, we ZOOM in to about 2000 rock throws away east of Helsinki. ZOOM in to the thickest of bushes in the woods.
-Snow, cold, white, pure, christal but blue tinting, PAN UP to blue dark woods, lot's of snow. Wind synth sounds. We go deeper into the dark blue woods. DRumming music. Indian drum. I mean Native American Drum.
+Snow, cold, white, pure, christal but blue tinting, PAN UP to blue dark woods, lot's of snow. Wind synth sounds. We go deeper into the dark blue woods. They humming mixes with drumming. Indian drum. I mean Native American Drum. Or African or Native lookin anyways.
CODER
(O.S.)
@@ -145,7 +277,9 @@ Close up of coder he start thinkin, long time ago I did this stupid thing, wait
INT. CODER HOME
-Close UP Coder fixing the thing. Plugin the device in to this roatry thing he buildin. We see screen. COder is writing in the terminal.
+Music like Bob Dylan - Hurricane.
+
+Close UP Coder fixing the thing. Pluggin the device in to this roatry thing he buildin. We see screen. COder is writing in the terminal.
nmap 27.71.27.*
@@ -158,7 +292,9 @@ We go into c code we looks at it he go.
CODER
Whadda fuuuck have i been smoking.
-(Mr. Robot) Mise-en-scénen while he patches up the code in Vim. We see a clean up version of same code to the roatry coder program he probably written cuz he goddam awesome, we then see hi build this gui to it just to show his amazing skills in python3 and Kivy on a Raspberry pi with touchscreen.
+Mise-en-scéne while he patches up the code in Vim. We see a clean up version of same code to the roatry coder program he probably written cuz he goddam awesome, we then see hi build this gui to it just to show his amazing skills in python3 and Kivy on a Raspberry pi with touchscreen.
+
+Music fades. Wind. Cold howlin wind.
EXT. CODER YARD - WINTER EVENING
@@ -185,6 +321,8 @@ God damit!
We outside. WHOLE PICTURE tractor. Tractor lights on. Snow and ice blazing in the blue dark evening against tractor lights, looks cool. We looking at the time, how about it, print the time on the screen. It's 0420pm Skinnarby Time. Tractor start picking up wood and run it through this thing and cuts em.
+Music like The Thing - Main theme
+
Coder is standing away from the tractor now. He got them cool skiglases. Hi gotta hold on to his Big Hat and hoodie. Alot of blazin snow. CLOSE UP him going downhill in the hill he make a jump into the blue blaze.
Coder notice someone follow him. Look like black thing with glowin eyes in the woods. They are all around him in the forrest. These loong arms funny looking slow pace beeings looking at him, following him.
@@ -193,6 +331,10 @@ CODER
(V.O.)
We imagine only what we've been told what's real. When we start to find out what's really real, we get amazed, so amazed that we shut us in deeper to the abyss of all the false promesis, the truth hurts first. then u start thinking, then u notice it is beautiful.
+These beeing still following Coder.
+
+CUT TO:
+
INT. THE APPLE TREE IN HOUSE JUICE HOME DELIVARANCE SYSTEM
A kitchen where an apple three hangs so close that you can pic apples from a window to the kitchen help desk table or whatever u call them. A mother pics them apples and ferment some, make some hillo with honey and then she bake an pie. Apple pie with kanel. Real kanel and butter. Coffe is almost ready drippin. Cake is almost ready in owen. Looking real tasty. KID1 runs into the room. he got his shoes on jump up om table. spill some bowl. KID1 jumps outta the window.
@@ -202,7 +344,7 @@ CODER
Imagine a world where your food grows from the ground up into your house, fresh apple juice every mornin and it's delivarance a specific time of year and you pressed some, fermented some and made a cake outta some. No pollution. Only benefits. Good shit.
And you get to climb that three
-EXT APPLE TREE HOUSE
+EXT. APPLE TREE HOUSE
KID1 jumps outta the window onto the apple three coming in from the window. Climbing down the tree. KID2 is down by the tree looking at KID1 climbing.
@@ -223,7 +365,7 @@ I'm coming up getting my rope. I knew you wouldn't have the balls doin it. What
KID1 jump outta one window holdin on to this rope. He then swing around the apple tree, go inside another room on the other side of the tree, he go through an open window.
-INT. FAMILY TV ROOM
+INT. FAMILY TV ROOM - DREAM LIKE
KID1 jumps into a room where a family eating an apple cake and whatching an old TV where the KID1 does the jump from the window. that we just saw, CLOSE UP on the Dad, MOther, Daughter, and KID1 laughing at the stunt. And then laughing at watching them selves laughing in the TV screen.
@@ -276,11 +418,11 @@ There's no one going into towns anymore. Some go. And you know the ones. One is
Coder looking at the red glowing fireplace that's not burnin anymore.
CODER
-Some say he this crazy kung foo master from japan. I don't know.
+Some say he this crazy Kung Foo Master. I don't know.
INT. BAKERY
-Kung Foo master from Japan in bakery. He got a stick. You hear something coming with great velocity at him. Like a bird or a.. it's a bread!. It is the Rye Bread type, "Reikäleipä", round flat with a hole in the middle. The breads keep coming at great speed at KUNG FOO MASTER who hit the bread holes everytime and they go on the stick til the stick is full with bread.
+Kung Foo Master in bakery. He got a stick. You hear something coming with great velocity at him. Like a bird or a.. it's a bread!. It is the Rye Bread type, "Reikäleipä", round flat with a hole in the middle. The breads keep coming at great speed at KUNG FOO MASTER who hit the bread holes everytime and they go on the stick til the stick is full with bread.
CHEF lookin at breads in an owen.
@@ -362,7 +504,7 @@ We preserved all of those beautifal perennialls and started livin and depend on
EXT. CODER HOUSE - PARTY EVENING
-People outside drinking Rastabrew and eating good lookin food. Aaw making me hungry. Looking reaal good. Meat and Vegetables. Two pig Pots and Pans on the table in the garden. It look like a fun party. GOOD MUSIC. Like Luoie Armstrong but something else still. Slo-mo. People haven fun. THere's a baand playin on a wooden stage outside. People are dancing in slomoo. WE fade to that music. Real-speed. Band they stop playin.
+People outside drinking Rastabrew and eating good lookin food. Aaw making me hungry. Looking reaal good. Meat and Vegetables. Two pig Pots and Pans on the table in the garden. It look like a fun party. GOOD MUSIC. Like "La Logia Sarabanda - Cajón De Castañas". Slo-mo. People haven fun. THere's a baand playin on a wooden stage outside. People are dancing in. Slo-moo. Real-speed. Band they stop playin.
BAND LEADER
We all want to thank you all for this amazing evenin. And to Bebin for hosting the whole evening and I'm sure the whole night as well.
@@ -525,7 +667,7 @@ A scene where a camera tries to identify Coder. We only see the camera start sea
EXT. CODERs Yard - SOMMER DAY NOON AROUDN 420pm
-Coders House from a distance. We see his yard is looking nice and good. Alot of green things. Nice. Butterflies and Bees just got in the picture. It's about midday. A little past four probably. A sound best described as millions of computers talking. Changing frequencies. Low humming. Space crafty. Rotating Earthy. That's right, rotating earthy, you nailed it!
+Coders House from a distance. We see his yard is looking nice and good. Alot of green things. Nice. Butterflies and Bees just got in the picture. It's about midday. A little past four probably. A sound described as millions of computers talking. Changing frequencies. Low humming. Space crafty. Rotating Earthy. That's right, rotating earthy, you nailed it!
This sound actually blends in with the bees quite a bit.
@@ -603,68 +745,6 @@ Tha'ts right. The people gotten the chip from their brain removed and who not di
Close UP Coder. Dont know what to think.
-EXT. SCANVENGERS INTRO - NIGHT WOODS
-
-They drink käsidesi and look like shit
-
-EXT. SHED AND HOUSE
-
-SCANVENGERs pick up an axe, shovel, and other tools from the shed. They walk to the big lit window of the house. There's a family watching TV, a BOY, a GIRL, a FATHER and a MOTHER. They watch a movie.
-
-INT. HOUSE
-
-The Father notices something is up. He got a HUnch. We hear the Window crash. SMACK. Bad guys come in from window.
-
-FATHER
-(shouting)
-GO! RUN!
-
-The girl of the family run to another room upstairs and knows where his fathers shotgun is at. She opens a secret drawer or something, I donnu I. Secret place. The girl throw shotgun to father and belt with shells. Father start loading shotgun standing in the stairs. The mother and sister went to another room. Father goes to see with shotgun hi up. The girl take a knife from the secret drawer. She go down the stair. CLOSE UP. feet. CLOSE UP girl with knife. BAD MOTHERFUCKING MUSIC.
-
-CLOSE UP dad in the tv room he looking at broken window. SHit fuck where are they. Fuck what if they got mother and son?
-
-There's a bad guy. Dad shoots, misses. The father missed. Somebody shoot at him. A shot goes through his body and makes a huge hole into the wall where the girl is standing, she is down from the stairs.
-
-The girl look like OMFG WTF.
-
-Father take cover and put more ammo in shotgun. He shoot. He miss. He shoot again just to scare them off.
-
-A guy from behind hit him with a shovel in his head. He shoot this guys shovel when he is trying to do it again. The shovel bounces in bad guy head. Nice DONG! sound.
-
-The father crawls up. He look at girl. He show to girl go away.
-
-FATHER
-(whisper)
-run, run!
-
-They can hear that the bad guys has their mother and boy in another room. Father again. Hand sign to girl go away.
-
-FATHER
-Run!
-
-Father goes full Rambo Commando mode in the room where boy and mother is. Flying and shooting with his shotgun in slo-mo. BLAM! pump, BLAM! pump, BLAM! pump. Still in the air.
-
-FATHER
-AAaaargh!
-
-We hear shoting sound from pistol coming from the room father just jumped in. The girl still standin same location. We hear a body fall. There's near to near combat. WE hear mother and boy scream. THey hit boy with something. Sounded like an axe, I'm sorry, but that was how it sounded like. No sound anymore.
-
-The girl is terrified. sHe hear somebody comming. A man come up to her. We dont see his face.
-
-The man fires the gun but. Click! it dont fire. The kid get away. The kid get away.
-
-MAN
-Good damit!
-
-He donks the firearm in the door carm, it fires. BANG!
-
-MAN
-GOd damnit!
-
-EXT. SHED AND HOUSE
-
-Kid runnin away from her home. Other side of road there is a cementary. She run trough cementary.
-
CUT TO:
INT. COMPUTER SCREEN
@@ -1571,20 +1651,24 @@ EXT. INT. CODER FROM WINDOW
CODER
..mistake I did a terrible misstake. I know how to fix it now.
-Coder turns a knob and there's electic shocks everywhere. On all of them. There's an electric shock going up from Coders house in the sky. Humongus Explotion. BIG HUGE MOTHERFUCKING LIGHT.
+Coder turns a knob and there's electic shocks everywhere. On all of them. There's an electric shock going up from Coders house in the sky. Humongus Explotion. BIG HUGE MOTHERFUCKING LIGHT ZAP ONE TIE.
EXT. EARTH FROM OUTER SPACE
-There's a small light coming from south of Finland, Skinnarby actually. It grows and suddnly BLAM BANG! I's a huge Light leading into space. We see the nuclear warheads all over flying. they start buzzin. Electic shocks on them. GoPro footage.
+There's a small light coming from south of Finland, Skinnarby actually. It grows and suddnly BIG BADA BOOM! I's a huge Light seen from space. We see the nuclear warheads all over flying. they start buzzin. Electic shocks on them. GoPro footage.
INT. KERNEL OFFICE
KERNEL
-Well it was nice knwing you Agent. Now if you dont mind I'd rather be alone these last minutes of my life.
+Well it was nice knwing you Agent. See you again someday hopefully. Hahaha.
+(laughing)
-Elecric buzzing sound. THere's lightning from all the outlets and all machines blows up. Special Agent goes out of the office.
+Kernel step inside an old elevator laughing.
+
+KERNEL
+So long suckers.
-Kernal take out a gun from his drawer and point it but same time he try to shot he get elecrocuted and cant press the trigger. He gets grilled for a minute, then it stops, then for 4 more seconds.
+Elevator door closes. To secret under ground bunker, that's bunkers right.
CUT TO:
@@ -1600,7 +1684,7 @@ Putin is sitting at his desk. Alone in his big room. With this humongus desk we
PUTIN
(in russian) Camera ready.
-There's a fat russian tv reporter ARZ or ARZHOV making Putin tv news broadcast and Putin Bodyguard True Face, A faking giant of a man. His the Kong in King, the Chong of the Cheech. He follow you anywhere u got him on your side. Arrz put music cassette player he carry with him on a table nearby, he takes a casette from his pocket with white gloves and opens it and takes out the casette. CLOSE UP casette player, he puts the casette in the player. It looks funny. Three people in that humongus room. We can see Arrz got a damn fine three point tv lighting systems.
+There's a fat russian tv reporter ARZ or ARZHOV making Putin tv news broadcast and Putin Bodyguard True Face, A faking giant of a man. His the Kong in King, the Chong of the Cheech. He follow you anywhere u got him on your side. Arrz put music cassette player he carry with him on a table nearby, he takes a casette from his pocket with white gloves and opens it and takes out the casette. CLOSE UP casette player, he puts the casette in the player. It looks funny. Three people in that humongus room. We can see Arrz got a damn fine three point tv lighting systems. The windows are a scenografy. They are in a huge cave or something.
Arrz give four fingers in the following order. Little one, Pointy One, Ring One, Middle One. Up in the sky.
