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Author: rob <rob@tarina.org>
Date: Mon, 21 Nov 2022 17:56:42 +0200
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@@ -32,33 +32,75 @@ Robins Trägård, Skinnarby, FINLAND
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+CODER
+(O.S.)
+(Read like a bruce willis one liner)
+The Best Way To Stop it is To Do Better Brainwashing
+
+EXT. SPACE MOSTLY NIGHT
+
+Earth from space. Some part still eveneing most part dark. Some part dark and cloudy and with thunder storm. Other part are clear sky you see the city lights. We fly up. There's snow. Northern Earth above the 60 degree line. 2000 rock throws away east of Helsinki. In the woods.
+
Snow, looks cold, white, pure, christal but blue tinting, PAN UP to blue dark woods, lot's of snow. Wind synth sounds. We go deeper into the dark blue woods. DRumming music. Indian drum. I mean Native American Drum.
CODER
-(Reading one liners V.O.)
-"The Best Way To Stop it is To Do Better Brainwashing"
-"Did we build it for something or did we build it for nothing"
-"Time has come, show me what you got"
-"You Aint got nothing if You Aint got nothing"
-"Good brainwaching is Stimulation"
-"Sure, I'll have that cold Bleep After that tasty Burger"
-"Back from where I come from whe say; Nah you aint raised even chicken you be raisin naatin."
+(O.S.)
+Did we build it for something or did we build it for nothing.
+
+We go deep into dark dark thick spruce woods, there's a fire. We go closer to the fireplace. There's no body there. Foot trails in the snow. Somebody been there for sure.
+
+CODER
+(O.S.)
+Time has come, show me what you got. Show me your cards. I show mine.
+
+There's a figure sitting by the fire. We don't see but a dark silhuette of this sitting figure contry the dark blue woods in the background.
+
+CODER
+(O.S)
+You Aint got nothing if You Aint got nothing.
+Here this is what I got.
+
+Coder throws a stick up in the sky. It become a satellite.
+
+EXT. SPACE
+
+Stick become satellite alá Kubrick. Satellite beeping somethin. Buzzin. GoPro Footage of Satellite.
+
+CODER
+Good brainwaching is Stimulation
+
+INT. TELEVISION
+
+KID2 in a commercial. He look unnatural smiling. VEry sunny and green green nice garden behind him. It is so sunny that people have umbrellas in the garden. They sit and lay in the shade with swimmingsuit. Some take direct sunlight some in the shade. A women is getting a massage. We hear someone opening a beverage. We see a dude and then a woman drinking this cold bevarage. KID2 in picture.
+
+KID2
+Sure, I'll have a cold one!
+
+TV VOICE
+HAave a COld one!
+(Singing with a Choir)
+Cauze evybaadi should have one
INT. CODERS HOME
-Picture of ladybugs. Picture of dead chili. Picture of Aphids.
-Pictures of chilipeppers dooin just fine. It's blue outside contry to the inside with green chiliplants and nice led full spectrum lights. Outside is lots of snow, it dark blue. We hear the coffe going in the background probably in kitchen, nope it's a coffe table near keyboard. There is a smoke going also. HOme rolled.
+Still hearing the Tv Voice in the background
+
+TV VOICE
+Rastabrew! It is the Hoppiest hopps for this year christ...(zap buzz!)
+
+The Tv shuts off. Picture of dead chili plants. Picture of Aphids, small little green bugs of some of them chili plant leaves and stems. Pictures of other chilipeppers plants dooin just fine. It's blue outside contry to the inside with green chiliplants and nice led full spectrum light. Outside is lots of snow, it dark blue. We hear the coffe going in the background probably in kitchen, nope it's a coffe table near keyboard. There is a smoke going also. HOme rolled.
We see Coder takin the pan with on going droppin coffe and then manages to somehow not spill any and puts pan with still droppin water on coffe maker plate the MOCCAMASTER, old and dirty. Oh so he used another cup to put the coffee filter thing on. NO magic goin on here. Water however dropped on the plate.
CODER
-That will only clean the plate and steam the room.
+(To himself)
+That gonna clean the plate and steam the room.
He putting down the yellow green red painted humongus cup of coffee on the table touching the keyboard and almost spilling coffe on it.
-He sitting drinkin coffe looking straight ahead. It morning. NIce blue weather outside. You see in the windows. Old tree house windows. Fire is on in a big round owen next to where Coder is sitting. He main computer spot. Everythin look abit houme made. Yellow lightish but not so much inside. He got glass table with ongoing computer projects. We see arduino project. And a couple of things with a 4 rotary encoder motors. LAzer!
+He sitting drinkin coffe looking straight ahead. It morning. NIce blue white weather outside. You see reflections of what is inside the room but it all wierd and looks distorted. It old windows. Old tree house windows. Fire is on in a big round owen next to where Coder sit. He main computer spot. Everythin look abit houme made. Yellow lightish but not so much inside. Some purple grow lights here and there. He got glass table with ongoing what looks like electric computer ship, I meen chip projects. We see arduino projects. And a couple of things with 4 rotary encoder motors. Some LAzers and a spinning thing! A raspi! OMFG!
-Coder sippin coffe. He look at some paper throews it bag where it was.Coder light a smoke. And suck it one time. We hear the smoke evaporate and he blow into the fireplace trowin the stomp with it. He close fireplace and hit enter. CLOSE UPS computer boot up. Hi-POT OK. Antec. We see in computer. Light turns on. Screen turns on. A 3d-printer turns on.
+Coder sippin coffe. He look at some paper throews it back where it was.Coder light a smoke. And suck it one time. We hear the smoke burnin like it evaporate and he blow it on time into the fireplace trowin the stomp with all smoke. (make movie magic, for special fx dept. Put big fire in stowe. CLose it where smoke get oout. Wiat for it, wait for it, now open the stowe door with a fishline, good old fishing line, same time make KUNGFOO movement throwin the stomp. IMportante! dont forget to open where smoke supposed to get out, u will otherwise kill all crew is supposed to work on the movie. Note to Director here also. Remember to let smoke out from the savupiippu.) The fireplace door slam shut and Coder hit enter. CLOSE UPS computer boot up. Hi-POT OK. Antec. We see in computer. Light turns on. Screen turns on. A 3d-printer turns on.
ANET-A8 (3D PRINTER)
(robot voice, bit like stephens)
@@ -73,20 +115,22 @@ The ANET-A8 voice is like fallin down a well before it go out with a static buzz
PUMPING TECHNO MUSIC alá MR ROBOT. CODER got some kinda machine that is rotating another thing and lazer sensors. CLOSE UP Lazer!
-CLOSE UP Ladybugs eatings some Aphids. Lot of plants. Small plant buddies coming up from ground in purpleish growing light light.
+CLOSE UP Ladybugs eatings some Aphids. Lot of plants. Small plant buddies coming up from ground in pots with soil, purpleish growing light lights the ladybugs crawlin around in the healty looking soil.
EXT. WOODS - DAY
-A tractor in the woods. Cutting down trees. There's someone with skiis in the woods on a hill. He stop byy just lookin. He goes for the hill. He skiis to the tractor lookin ginda stupid but cool i guess. He dont fall. He go to tractor. Tractor open door. Throws a box on the ground. We see TRACTOR MAN. Look sad and look like he be sitting there for a long time just smokn cigarettes and drinkin coffee.
+A tractor in the woods. Cutting down trees. There's someone with skiis in the woods on a hill looking down on the tractor a rock throw away. He maybe stop byy just lookin. He goes for the hill. Is it Coder? WHo is it goin fast, he go to thick spruce trees. He come downhill with he skiis to the tractor lookin ginda stupid but cool i guess. He dont fall. He go to tractor. Tractor open door. Throws a box on the ground. We see TRACTOR MAN. Look sad and look like he be sitting there for a long time just smokn cigarettes and drinkin coffee.
TRACTOR MAN
-Fix it. It's crap.
+Fix it. It's shit.
CODER
Hey maan, u didnt need to throw it on the ground.
+Coder does this movement with his shoulder and point with both arms at the box.
+
TRACTOR MAN
-It was a gravity fall test. now we know if it dont break dont fix it. Fix it it brokem, ok, sometings up. yo. Fix it. It's crap.
+It was a gravity fall test. now we know if it dont break dont fix it. Fix it it broken, ok, sometings up. yo. Fix it.
Coder just show he dont now what up. Tractor man
@@ -94,9 +138,9 @@ TRACTOR MAN
It works but it's crap. You knew about it. All theses years you could have fixed it, patched it, you said you knew it was buggy and that you gonna patch it up. Then suddenly you swing by 10 years later. 10 years later. Haha haha. Very funny.
CODER
-Okey man I look into it.
+Okey maan, I look into it.
-Coder pic up the box, it look ok, Coder's like sup man? ok, ok, i lookin in to it. goddam!
+Coder pic up the box, it look ok, he looks at it, turns it around. Coder's like sup man? ok, ok, i lookin in to it.
Close up of coder he start thinkin, long time ago I did this stupid thing, wait a minute, yeah now I remember. He goes off a downhill, whoa, he almost drop the box.
@@ -106,7 +150,7 @@ Close UP Coder fixing the thing. Plugin the device in to this roatry thing he bu
nmap 27.27.27.*
-We see Coder writing looking bored. He goes to the roatry thing on the table. Turns it around looks at the screen, hii bored. Back to screen hee now sshd in wizzard@oz he write
+We see Coder writing looking bored. He goes to the roatry thing on the table. Turn it around looks at the screen, LaZers! but Coder hii bored. Back to screen hee now sshd in wizzard@oz he write
vim main.c
@@ -117,7 +161,7 @@ Whadda fuuuck have i been smoking.
He patches up the code. We see a clean up version of same code to the roatry coder program he probably written cuz he goddam awesome, we then see hi build this gui to it just to show his amazing skills in python3 and GTK4 on a Raspberry pi, with frekin a touchscreen.
-EXT. CODER YARD
+EXT. CODER YARD - WINTER NIGHT
We back out. Coder leave house with the box. There is a snow storm outside. Coder just go into the snow blaze with this box.
@@ -129,7 +173,9 @@ CODER
(all yelling cuz of the storm)
Yeah, you where right, I didnt know what I was doing back then now it works.
-We outside. Tractor turns on. Door doesnt want to shut cuz all of the snow and ice just blazed in the tractor.
+Close UP on Tractor Man just givin thumbs up and then reaces for the door to close it.
+
+We outside. Door doesnt want to shut cuz all of the snow and ice just blazed in the tractor. Tractor Man fucking slams that Tractor door shut and start the tractor.
TRACTOR MAN
God damit!
@@ -209,12 +255,12 @@ EXT. FIREPLACE IN THE WOODS.
Hunter and Coder sitin waitin for stew to be ready. CLOSE UP stew. One goes to stew and with a spoon taste it. It taste good.
-Hunter and COder eating stew. and some bread from the bread-o-mat. There's stars. They watch them. They see many many star falling. Wow. Cool. It winter and the star light up the snow. You can see in the dark. The moon. It is almost full. It's zoomed in. CLOSE UP. Nice. An Owl. WoW.
+Hunter and COder eating stew. and some bread from the bread-o-mat. There's stars. They watch them. They see many many star falling. Wow. Cool. It winter and the star light up the snow. You can see in the dark. The moon. It is almost full. It's zoomed in. CLOSE UP. Nice. An Owl.
CODER
There's no one going into towns anymore. Some go. And you know the ones. One is The Maker mii Baker the Madbaker as someone calls him. Hell, I don't even know his real name. In fact, I don't even wana know.
-Coder looking at the red glowing fireplace that's not burnin anymore.
+Coder looking at the red glowing fireplace that's not burnin anymore.
CODER
Some say he this crazy kung foo master from japan. I don't know.
@@ -253,7 +299,7 @@ EXT. FORREST BLUE MORNING
Shots of trees gettin the first sun light. CLOSE UP sun raisin from behind the trees.
CODER
-We got it pretty good. Got it together you know. No buddy want to mess with anybody from where im from. I meen, you have to stick with the ones you gotta around. Villages rule. Some steal everything you got. It's the Wild WIld West out there some places. Many lost their homes. They move in these scavenger groups. You're out numbered out there if you live to far out and if you put up a fight, they try to kil you, they wana fight you, they crazy ass motherfuckers and they gonna kill you anyways. We call them the SCANVENGERS. A pack is best as a village two to three hundred or so. And could you imagine, these good villages around, they living the best days of their lands, they started producing everything again, making awesome local food from responsible home grown stuff again. Everybody got out into the lands and microbiology and mycology, we had the knowledge to do it. Even more than before. Never before had there been a Permanent Culture movement taking over this fast. We started taking more responsibilites, our lands florished. We saw more possibilites to create food and forrests and foodforrests than one could ever have imagined, we got busy living, IRLING, as we say it.
+We got it pretty good. Got it together you know. No buddy want to mess with anybody from where im from. I meen, you have to stick with the ones you gotta around. Villages rule. Some steal everything you got. It's the Wild WIld West out there some places. Many lost their homes. They move in these scavenger groups. You're out numbered out there if you live to far out and if you put up a fight, they try to kil you, they wana fight you, they crazy ass motherfuckers and they gonna kill you anyways. We call them the SCANVENGERS. A pack is best as a village two to three hundred or so. And could you imagine, these good villages around, they living the best days of their lands, they started producing everything again, making awesome local food from responsible home grown stuff again. Everybody got out into the lands and microbiology and mycology, we had the knowledge to do it. Even more than before. Never before had there been a Permanent Culture movement taking over this fast. We started taking more responsibilites, our lands florished. We saw more possibilites to create food and forrests and foodforrests than one could ever have imagined, we got busy living, IRRLING, as we say it.
EXT. CODER YARD
@@ -315,6 +361,8 @@ Dadadadam!
NEWS GUEST
Everything is just gonna get so so much better from here. Trust me. Trust in us. In You. Everybody is welcome to the must trusted World Wide Team. Here are the TEam Members! Weee have Esmeraldaa! Esmeralda is very good at everything, what she does she does best. Look at her no body has such a big giant smile than her. I meen Look at her. She soo cuuute.
+Applause.
+
CODER
(V.O.) while the show goes on
nope it is impossible! Why they still fall for it? believing something as stupid as that. Good brainwashing. We all fall for it, we always do, before we grow up. Something however are meant to be leaven and is meant to be the road to stick to and maybe try other paths only to find oneself on that same path. Back to the original you. You born what u born too.
@@ -325,11 +373,11 @@ Coder is now outside on chair in chicken coup feeding his chicken. He blows his
CODER
(V.O.)
-Some people just got really stupid and focus on them selfcenterd thinking all problems just from these wierd stupid things about them and believing throwing money they dont have on eerything solves eevrything without havin to solev nothin. LIke cutin of your own dick solve anythin?
+Some people just got really stupid and focus on them selfcenterd thinking all problems just from these wierd stupid things about them and believing throwing money they dont have on eerything solves eevrything without havin to solev nothin. LIke cutin your own dick would solve anythin? curse u body u do what the fuck u want. But to me you just a dickless man then. Just a dickless man.
EXT. CODER YARD - WINTER 420pm
-Coder walks from red shed to house in his morning coat.
+Coder walks from red shed in blueish snowy yard to house in his red purple striped morning coat.
INT. CODER HOUSE
@@ -340,20 +388,27 @@ CODER
What u do with these peoples, we the retarded debt people? It's been a plague. Worse even I believe.
CODER
-(V.O.)
-Thank god you cant change ur kromosome and that they didn't know what the fuck they were dooing. PEople started zoning out on that BS propaganda. You born to what you born to. It come down to that. Men can't just raise their voice a little and become a lady. wtf!? In movies Arnold can have babies but movies make anything possibbe as you'll see in this movie!
+(O.S.)
+Thank god you cant change ur cromosome and that they didn't know what the fuck they were dooing. PEople started zoning out on that BS propaganda. You born to what you born to. It come down to that. Men can't just raise their voice a little and become a lady. wtf!? In movies Arnold can have babies but movies make anything possibbe as you'll see in this movie!
Picture of scrolling through World Depth Clock https://usdebtclock.org/world-debt-clock.html.
CODER
-I meen really?? What are we doing and why are we doing it? I meen look at it! I meaan it scam.
+I meen really?? What are we doing and why are we doing it? I meen look at it! I meaan it a huge fuckin scam aal of it. Burn away babylon. Burn away EuroLink.
Coder looking at FInnish national depth. In 2037. It fuckin peakin astronicially since 2020. Everythin before that is just a flat line.
Money printer goes Brrrrrrrrrr. Mr. Robot mise-o-sen. Pumpin music.
CODER
(V.O.)
-paper turning people with bullshit jobs who dont produce aything of any value to whom whatsoever, who killing evybadi and evything it touches. They need us to fix their bodies so they can live with them self. If we would have not run outta oil these peple would have killed us for sure. Thank fucking god it got scares. You dont play by their rules. and we ok! it just that a good amount of peoples still belive that crap. we got internet, its more decentrilzed than ever cuz its patched by the common people. We the Plebs and Magic internet money is dong just fine. (picture of bitcoin, price now 420.535, went up to 1270.000).
+paper turning people with bullshit jobs who dont produce aything of any value to whom whatsoeveri who killing evybadi and evything it touches.
+
+The worst ones. All the states. They get to spend and spend. Print and spend some more. All Pardoned. Still pardoned. Played the game of gettin ridd of us humans from planet earth forever.
+
+CODER
+They need us to fix their bodies so they can live with them self. If we would have not run outta oil these peple would have killed us for sure. Thank fucking god it got scares. You dont play by their rules. and we ok! it just that a good amount of peoples still belive that crap. we got internet, its more decentrilzed than ever cuz its patched by the common people. We the Plebs and Magic internet money is dong just fine.
+
+Picture of bitcoin https://bitcointicker.co, price now 1.337.535$/btc, went up to 12.270.420). Gold curve dont look that amazing. Stay behind. Sorry Peter.
A scene where a camera tries to identify Coder. We only see the camera start searching for object. No answer CUT TO:
