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Author: rob <rob@tarina.org>
Date: Mon, 21 Nov 2022 23:51:07 +0200
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@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ Title:
Credit: Written by
Author: Robin J. Bäckman
Source: Story by Beckmen Brothers
-Draft date 4/20/2022
+Draft date 4/20/2022 Second draft
Contact:
A Rastabrew Production
Permanent Culture International
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ Contact:
===
-a Rockman Brothers movie film
+a Rockman Brothers movie
written by Robin J Bäckman
story by Beckmen Brothers
dedicated to All The Free, Fuck YEah!
@@ -498,17 +498,53 @@ They drink käsidesi and look like shit
INT. SCANVENGER Rob Family Scene
-SCANVENGERs pick up an axe, spade, and tools from the shed. Ultimate fight scene. Dad gives a hell of a good fight and would have won he only hesitated when he should have killed them. Only cause of his good well willing heart, he die and his daughter get killed and probably raped, god only knows what this sick fucks can do. I mean it was a Good fight. And they would totally have made it but Scanvengers had a gun. They shot him dead like a dog. Son saw this. Hiding. They shoot Daughter and rape Woman. They most evel. Only Evel men. They sey they avatars. Players playing controlling humans thinking real life is a game, what would you do if u could respawn all the time in this world? Anyways the son run away. Son run away.
+SCANVENGERs pick up an axe, shovel, and other tools from the shed. They walk to the big lit window of the house. There's a family watching TV. The Father notices something. He got a HUnch. We hear the Window crash. SMACK. Bad guys come in from window.
+
+FATHER
+(shouting)
+GO! RUN!
+
+The boy of the family run to another room upstairs and knows where his fathers shotgun is at. He opens a secret drawer or something, I donnu I. Secret place. The boy throw gun to father. Who now in the stair.
+
+There's a bad guy. Dad shoots, misses. The father missed. Somebody shoot at him. A shot goes through his body and makes a huge hole into the wall where the boy is standing. The boys look like OMFG WTF. Father put more ammo in shotgun. Two more round he shoot. He miss. A guy hit him with a shovel in his head from behind. He shoot this guys shovel when he try to do it again. The shovel bounces in bad guy head. Nice DONG! sound. The father crawls up. He look at boy. He show to boy go away, he give hand sign.
+
+FATHER
+(whisper)
+run son, run!
+
+They hear that the bad guys has their mother and sister. Father again. Hand sign to boy go away
+
+FATHER
+Run!
+
+Father goes full Rambo Commando mode in another room. Flying and shooting his shotgun. Five shells. One. BLAM! Two. BLAM! Three. The boy still standin same location. We hear a body fall. There's near two near combat. WE hear somebody shoot mother and sister scream. THey hit sister with something. Sounded like an axe, I'm sorry, but that was how it sounded like. The boy is terrified. He hear somebody comming. A man come up to him. We dont see his face.
+
+The man fires the gun but. Click! it dont fire. The kid get away.
+
+MAN
+Good damit!
+
+He donks the firearm in the door carm, it fires. BANG!
+
+MAN
+GOd damnit!
+
+CUT TO:
+
+INT. COMPUTER SCREEN
+
+PLAYER
+Players playing controlling humans. It's this we can get in and play. It should be toatally illigal. It's a hack to a feature in the Neuro/EuroLink system that was supposed to come in a couple of years the company CEO havent yet said anything else than hi sorry and that hi only human and he make mistake also. And you should never try going in. People that do it are irresponsible and dont now what their dooing. It is Like in Avatar the movie. You can control another buddys body, whitout them knowing it. It's absolutley sick.
EXT. CODER hacking wirepole
-Coder climbs up radiotowers // wirepole to install raspberry pi antenna to shoot wifi Internet to his buddies. While he talks about lady bugs, borax and ants, aphids.
+Coder climbs up radiotowers // wirepole to install raspberry pi antenna to shoot wifi Internet to his buddies. While he talks about lady bugs, borax ants and aphids.
EXT. BAKERY
-Hoodie goes to the factory to get bread. The bakery has bars on the windows making it look like a jail. A big neon sign "Fresh Baked Bread" on the roof of the factory, with only the words "sh Baked B" lit. Under that a another sign "Euro-Bread-o-Mat". Hoodie walks to the bread-o-mat that looks like a simple vending machine. There's a sign "Eurocoins only" with an "Insert Coin Here" sign and a arrow to a coin slot. He puts a couple of coins in the slot.
+Hoodie goes to the factory to get bread. The bakery has bars on the windows making it look like a jail. A big neon sign "Fresh Baked Bread" on the roof of the factory, with only the words "sh Baked B" lit. Under that a another sign "Euro-Bread-o-Mat". Hoodie walks to the bread-o-mat that looks like a simple vending machine. There's a sign "Eurocoins only" with an "Insert Coin Here" sign and a arrow to a coin slot. He put a couple of coin in the slot.
-Inside Bread-o-mat. There're rods with jengor which the breads are hanging upon. One of the rods start turning and a bread fall down. We can see that many breads are moldy inside the machine.
+Inside Bread-o-mat. There're rod which the breads are hanging upon. One of the rods start turning and a bread fall down. We can see that many breads are moldy down inside the machine.
The bread falls down into a little metallic pocket out on the wall. It's so dry that it breaks into a thousand pieces.
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-Hoodie gathers the pieces and eats them together with a voinappi. He then puts the bread in his pocket and starts walking with his mouth full of bread and butter.
+Hoodie gathers the pieces and eats them together with some butter. He then puts the bread in his pocket and starts walking with his mouth full of bread and butter.
SCANVENGER ONE (O.S.)
U know what we want! get down. Down on your knees buddy.
@@ -1538,21 +1574,45 @@ Coder nodding. Madbaker WTF!? GTOH.
Coder takes up tuba from chicken house, try to play it. It sound like shit.
-The END
+CUT TO:
+
+Black.
Music.
-The boy, KID1, has grown up. We get to see his most viral backflip faceplant smack down in the swamp video.
+The boy, KID1, has grown up. We get to see his most viral backflip faceplant smack down in the swamp video. He out in skate park. He see this guy come up in a old Red Toyota Carina. He come up to boy. Pull down window. He like do you know this man to the boy. He got a picture of Hoodie.
+
+The KID1 shake his head.
+
+KID1
+Never seen.
+
+The man in the red Carina drive away from the skate park. Crane shot down on the boy comin back in picture. He remember something. It was the same guy who killed his parents and his sister.
+
+EXT. STUNT APPLE TREE
+
+Kid1 at his old place. they take away his apple tree, where he did that stunt on TV. They say it to close to house now. New owners or whatever. How should I know.
+
+CUT TO:
+
+a Rockman Brothers movie
-Credits run as we see face swamp planting from everybody in the movie. And maybe everyone from behind the camera.
+a Rastabrew film
-A Rockman Brothers Production
-A Hoodiebrew film
Picture of Sheeta Rasta Chick.
+
Picture of Pirate Cock The Real Jack Sparrow.
-A Beckman Brothers movie
+
+A Beckman Brothers film
+
Back to Back
+
Story by Rob and Marty
+
Written and Directed by Rob
+
Scored by Marty, Jay and Hoodie
+
(Credits in order of appearence)
+
+We see face swamp planting from everybody in the movie. And everyone from crew and behind the camera.
