commit 88261a7e1f69e49f2e3b01f9ef37c36af1f40326
parent f3d528f1da23c552fb7bc13f01b177cfe22b0fa7
Author: robian <mobian@mobian>
Date: Tue, 15 Nov 2022 21:10:21 +0200
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@@ -116,17 +116,15 @@ Wormholes
-EXT.Coders Yard
+EXT. CODERs Yard
-CODER
+A sound best described as millions of computers talking. Changing frequencies. Low humming. Space craft. Rotating Earth.
-Coder walking with hoodie towards the shed in the morning with a coffee mug.
-He opens the door and the window, feeds the chicken, then sits down and drinks coffe while the chicken are being curious
+Closeup on mud and huge mushroom sprucing up from dead wood on the ground, CODERs feet walking in the mud. We see a red shed, RASTA walks along one of the walls with a morning coat and a mug in his one hand. He opens a hidden door on the side of the shed and gets in. He throws a carpet up which reveals a window wich he opens and chicken come running out. RASTA sits down on a chair and sips his drink, the chicken are looking at him. The chicken continue eating scraps of potatoes and beetroot and whatnot while the space computer earth sound fades slowly.
-INT. Coders House
+INT. CODERs House
-Opens the door, the handle falls down. Ninja the cat runs before him.
-Walks in to the kitchen and fills up with tea from the red teapot. He then Sits down by the computer, boots it up, starts writing in terminal.
+Coder opens the door, a black cat runs in before him. He walks past a bunch of chili plants, there's some Aphids on some of them. Close up on a Aphid bug as a ladybugs larvae eats it alive. He walks in to the kitchen and fills up with more tea from a red teapot. He then Sits down by the computer, boots it up, starts writing in terminal.
ssh -p 1337
@@ -134,7 +132,7 @@ EXT. The City
RASTA
-Rastaman is coming into town with his bicycle, He rides off-road in the forest Through a thick wall of spruce trees. He is going downhill fast and climbs up on the bike and jumps off, the bike goes between two rocks and stays there. Rasta lands on a huge giant rock. He takes three steps and jumps off the rock and takes his longboard from his back and lands on the road leading into town. In town he then goes on throwing bags of weed into postboxes and secret hideouts as a return he get money from various places, example a doll, or a pot inside a pot.
+RASTAman is coming into town with his bicycle, He rides off-road in the forest Through a thick wall of spruce trees. He is going downhill fast and climbs up on the bike and jumps off, the bike goes between two rocks and stays there. RASTA lands on a huge giant rock. He takes three steps and jumps off the rock and takes his longboard from his back and lands on the road leading into town. In town he then goes on throwing bags of weed into postboxes and secret hideouts as a return he get money from various places, example a doll, or a pot inside a pot.
Then later he goes to the bakery to get some fresh baked bread Bra Bröd. Sits outside the bakery and eats the bread and sips on a beer.
@@ -176,21 +174,21 @@ BREAD-FACTORY
EXT. BAKERY
-RASTA goes to the bakery to get bread. The bakery has Bars on the windows. The bread-o-mat which takes eurocoins, it delivers bread ( inside the bread-o-mat half of the breads are moldy) Rasta put coins and gets a dry bread. It falls down to a tray and brakes into thousands pieces cause it's dry. He gathers the pieces and eats them together with voinappi. At the same moment a couple scavengers rise up form the bush.
+RASTA goes to the bakery to get bread. The bakery has Bars on the windows. The bread-o-mat which takes eurocoins, it delivers bread ( inside the bread-o-mat half of the breads are moldy) RASTA put coins and gets a dry bread. It falls down to a tray and brakes into thousands pieces cause it's dry. He gathers the pieces and eats them together with voinappi. At the same moment a couple scavengers rise up form the bush.
SCANVENGER 1 (O.S.)
U know what we want, get down on your knees.
-Points a gun at Rasta.
+Points a gun at RASTA.
-Rasta turns around.
+RASTA turns around.
SCANVENGER 1
That's right, get down asshole
-Rasta sighs and hears a sound from behind.
+RASTA sighs and hears a sound from behind.
-SCANVENGER 2 approaches from behind RASTA with a grunting sound and points a knife at RASTA. RASTA looks at him.
+SCANVENGER TWO approaches from behind RASTA with a grunting sound and points a knife at RASTA. RASTA looks at him.
RASTA
Sighs
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SCANVENGER 1 turns his head looking at the swirling bullet passing by. The bullet hits the lightpole with a bell sound. OLD LADY passing by looks up at the lightpole. Bell sound gets wearry and and earie buzzing in a climbing high freaquense til lightbulbs breaks. SMACK, glass hits gravel. OLD LADY is now in the dark.
-SCANVENGER 2 looks at the lightpole and the bullet swirls by him fast and he is pissed scared.
+SCANVENGER TWO looks at the lightpole and the bullet swirls by him fast and he is pissed scared.
The bullet ricochets between two bars on the window. Making it sound like a train warning sound. The bullet then makes another richocchet and hits SCANVENGER 1 gun.
SCANVENGER 1
...fuck!?
-The bullet hits SCANVENGER 2 knife as it drops. It makes another richochett sound and hits the factory window and an alarm goes off. Blinking red lights.
+The bullet hits SCANVENGER TWO knife as it drops. It makes another richochett sound and hits the factory window and an alarm goes off. Blinking red lights.
ALARM SYSTEM
INTRUDER ALERT! INTRUDER ALERT! Activating automatic intruder defender.
-The Minigun wakes up from its hybernation mode and raises it self in horizontally. There is a camera that is moving around seeking intruders. The Minigun starts spinning with a low sound and then shots SCANVENGER 1 into pieces. The Minigun then continues to search for more targets and it blows the old lady into pieces.
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-The minigun turns towards Rasta.
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-SCANVENGER two is freaking out. He poops his pants.
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-RASTA grabs SCANVENGER 2 Two with his both hands, lifts him off his feet. Minigun start shooting toward Rasta. SCANVENGER Two's head blow off, and some hit in he's shoulder. Rasta takes cover from the rest of SCANVENGER 2:s body as Minigun shoots SCANVENGER 2:s back. Rasta moves backwards taking cover. One arm blows off. His ass blow off. Rasta is moving more quickly backwards. The last limb blows off and Rasta takes cover from the corner and throws a piece of bloody meat on the streets as the minigun still shooting the piece of meat until it's not moving anymore.
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+The Minigun wakes up from its hybernation mode and raises it self horizontally. There is a camera that is moving around seeking targets. The Minigun starts spinning with a low sound and then shots SCANVENGER 1 into pieces. The Minigun then continues to search for more targets and it blows the old lady into pieces.
+The minigun turns towards RASTA.
+SCANVENGER TWO is freaking out. MINIGUN start shooting. SCANVENGERS head pops, RASTA ducks under SCANVENGER TWO's body and grabs his arm so SCANVENGER TWO falls on RASTAS back. MINIGUN shoots rounds in torso of SCANVENGER TWO, RASTA takes cover from SCANVENGER TWO body as he keeps running for the corner. SCAVENGERS TWO's arm blows off. His ass blow off. MINIGUN keeps minigunning. RASTA moving more quickly towards the building corner. The last limb blows of off SCAVENGER TWO who is now just looking like a big piece of minced meat. RASTA takes cover from the corner and throws the piece of bloody meat on the streets as the minigun still shooting at it.
