tarina

commit d13d5d20851ff2832ddb7be2e5c7ac8ee2b3f32d
parent 8315d321e5d42fb348b4cc979b0b9fe406962841
Author: rob <rob@tarina.org>
Date:   Thu, 21 Sep 2023 11:42:05 +0300

Tarina Retake

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@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@ Tarina
 
 ![Two buddies](docs/tarina-promo.jpg)
 
-For the Love of Filmmaking
+Hollywood in your palms
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-Retake your shots on the spots and see the magic of your montage in the filmmaking OS that runs Tarina.
+Retake shots on your spots and see movie making magic in the filmmaking interface that runs Tarina Retake.
  
 Software
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@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ A video camera with *most of* the tools to make a film within the camera. That m
 - stream a film a take or a scene through the network
 - control the camera with silent physical buttons or a usb-wireless-keyboard or through https or ssh or ports, you choose.
 
-It's all in there. But, where? in the filmmaking OS, that is Tarina.
+It's all in there. But, where? in the filmmaking interface, that is Tarina.
 
 Hardware
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