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Author: rbckman <rbckman@localhost.localdomain>
Date:   Tue, 13 Nov 2018 12:50:27 +0200

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 ![Tarina Leone, one done & one in post processing stage](docs/tarina-leone.jpg)
 
-A camera for storytellers. Video camera that organizes takes, shots & scenes and glues your film together. 
+A video camera that organizes takes, shots & scenes and glues your film together. 
 
-Experience a new flow of filmmaking
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+Experience filmmaking flow
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 If you don't like how your [montage](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Montage_(filmmaking)) flows, retake. Once you "get it" there’s no need for editing. The camera is designed with a "hackers/makers philosophy" and is easy to take apart. It's built using the Raspberry Pi, running on a Gnu/Linux Raspbian distribution and with a python coded interface.
 
 Hardware
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 Software
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-The interface focuses on presenting all essential detail for manual filming in one menu that is present and accessible all the time. You can control the interface with a keyboard or with 9 physical buttons which are: Enter, Up, Down, Left, Right, Record, Retake, View and Remove.
+The interface focuses on presenting all essential detail for manual filming in one menu that is present and accessible all the time. You can control the interface with a keyboard or with 9 physical buttons; Enter, Up, Down, Left, Right, Record, Retake, View and Remove.
 
 Installing
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